Hi my name is Simon and I'm a student from hay park school. Today we were writing a POV Point over view. And there is a writing I did about the video.
Here I was playing video games on my XBOX 360. I was sitting down until my mum came home with a box. She put the box right in front of me I pushed the box over then carried on playing games. My mum said, “why don't you go play outside it’s a sunny day out there open the present I gave you (In a nice way).” When my mum went I paused the game and opened the box.
When I opened the box there was a puppy it jumped out of the box. But when I saw the front legs there was only 1 at the front and 2 at the back there were three legs. I got angry and threw the puppy away then started to carry on playing games.
The puppy tried to get my attention but then I pushed the puppy away. When it looked under the cupboard and saw a red ball. It started to play with the ball I was getting distracted. But then I paused my game and told my mum “Mum me and the dog will be outside!!!!” Then I got up with my
Hi Simon. i liked how your story had a reflection. it reminds me of when i did one, many times. Maybe next time you should make us see the whole story because we cant. anyways Good job. heres my blog http://wpsanaseinii.blogspot.com/
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